Thriller spine: inciting incident, central question, ticking clock. Put the incident early. End chapters with a reason to turn.
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Which line is weakest in your draft?

Thriller spine: inciting incident, central question, ticking clock. Put the incident early. End chapters with a reason to turn.
publishing.ebokio.com/blog/plottin...
Which line is weakest in your draft?