Literary agent. Ice cream snob. I bake a lot of bread.
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I don't accept queries over bluesky. Please follow the submission guidelines at https://ashliterary.com/#submissions and send any questions about your query to [email protected]

@tinyfairyhunter.bsky.social
Literary agent. Ice cream snob. I bake a lot of bread.
they/them
I don't accept queries over bluesky. Please follow the submission guidelines at https://ashliterary.com/#submissions and send any questions about your query to [email protected]
I'm so excited to be working with Linnea and her joyful illustrations!
Fuck ChatGPT flyers. The future is broadsheets.
This is a bit of a cop out, but I would say pick the books whose readers you think would be MOST excited to read yours. It's less about capturing the perfect spectrum and more about showing that you know your intended readership. #AskDV
Sarah is very good at this! Every virtual event I've worked has run very smoothly when Sarah is involved.
A climate in which publishers don't worry about book bans destroying crucial sales channels is a climate in which gatekeepers can more effectively advocate for projects by marginalized creators.
#askDV
I also want to add to this list @authorsabb.bsky.social and @pubprosabb.bsky.social, two groups organizing against book bans across the US. Book bans have shrunk the kidlit market, which relies on sales to schools and libraries (and disproportionately affects marginalized authors). #AskDV
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To not pitch those agencies. That’s absurd. #AskDV
“But I’m an agent who does that!”
Great. This is for you then, buddy.
If it works as a standalone, sure!There's just no guarantee a publisher will buy in for a sequel.
I don't think 99k will be an automatic no for most agents for YA sci-fi, but you're approaching 100k which many do use as a hard cutoff. Unfortunately, the decision for some agents is vibes-based: 96k feels like 95k feels like 90k so it's not a problem, 99k feels like 100k so it's too long.
This is a general guideline and not a hard rule, so it kinda depends. You may see some hand-holding relationships in upper middle grade, but you'll rarely see mg romance that goes beyond a first kiss.
We should all be so lucky
WHEW that's the end of the hour. Thanks to all who participated with thoughtful questions. I believe there's another #AskDV event with another group of agents next week, so if your questioned wasn't answered tonight, you can ask again then.
My big dialogue tips are
1) Say the lines out loud while you revise. You'll see what sounds awkward and what sounds like people actually talking.
2) Break it up with breaths and pauses and digressions and fidgets. Overly perfect dialogue will sound stilted, like a rehearsed speech.
Napkin math*: If it takes 1 yr to write a book, 6 mos to query, 3 mos for your agent to get the book on submission, 6 mos for a publisher to offer, and 2 yrs for the book to be released, that's 4.5 years (*optimistic timeline). Trends will change by then so don't worry about writing to trend. #askDV
The rules are a little looser for pitch events because you have so little space. I'd say for pitch events, go for specific vibe match and striking combos with your comps. In your query letter, use comps in your genre that are recently published and from newer authors. #askDV
If the story arc could feel complete at the end of Book 1 even if Book 2 is never published, use "standalone with series potential." If not, misrepresenting a trilogy as a standalone will hurt your chances because agents will see the unfinished narrative arc as a craft issue. #askDV
This will depend on the agent. I like working with authors across multiple genres when those are all genres I have experience with. I recommend researching agents who represent all the genres you write, not just the genre of the project you're currently querying. #askDV
Series are still popular, but it can be hard to get a publisher to invest in multiple books for an unknown author. That's why I recommend querying standalone projects the majority of the time. #askDV
I think it's always helpful to think about what purpose a scene is serving. For example, is it moving along a main plotline, subplot, character development? If it's not serving multiple purposes, it's a good candidate for being combined with another scene. #askDV
There are industry-wide efforts via groups like @weneeddiversebooks.bsky.social and @litagentsofchange.bsky.social. Several individual agents who prioritize submissions from specific marginalized groups. There are a lot of efforts in action right now! #askDV