Any TTRPG geeks wanna give feedback on a pictorial magic system? I’m really, really new to designing stuff but I have an idea. Even if I can just pick your brain briefly!!

Any TTRPG geeks wanna give feedback on a pictorial magic system? I’m really, really new to designing stuff but I have an idea. Even if I can just pick your brain briefly!!
Only a few are chosen to hold the magical vessels, and rarer still are those who can wield them. A gatekeeper guards the Magical Mandelas, a timeless and spaceless dimension housing magical vessels. It's constantly moving and hidden, just like Howl’s Moving Castle. #DVpit #magicsystem #F
In the Haven Chronicles, magic is tightly sewn to the caster’s physical form. Using magic is like using any muscle.
Find out more about the magic system in the Haven Chronicles here:
Currently putting the final touches on my elemental #magicsystem.
Or rather the surface magic system that the people in-world see after the original magic was corrupted.
Any feedback, or questions are highly apprciated, before I put t final version on my site.
#worldbuiding, #fantasy, #writing
1/3..
What do you think? Too Many Arrows?
#indiedev #fantasy #2.5DRPG #fantasyRPG #pixelart #openworld #survival #magicsystem #steamnextfest
“Yes. She got into a right state when she realized no one could read them, though. She's setting up some sort of literacy curse. Some of the boys want to know--is that like gypsy magic? Can you curse someone to read?”