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#bdsmfiction #kinkwriting

#bdsmfiction #kinkwriting

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Aftercare is the one scene where he has to talk in full sentences. Everything before it could be commands. This part cannot. Watch a writer who has only practised the commands try to write him gentle. That is where the book shows its hand. #kinkwriting #erotica

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Protocol is the quietest thing in the genre and the fastest to turn into a manual. Two rules and you feel the weight. Ten and you are reading an appendix.

Where is the line for you?

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Slow burn to submission turns on one moment: when she stops arguing with herself. It can only happen once in a book.

How do you know, as a reader, that it has happened?

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There is a brat scene you reread for the moment she loses, not the moment she wins. Not the punishment. The two seconds where she realises he never once considered giving up.

You have the page number. Nobody is asking for it.

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Being sent away is the sharpest punishment in the genre and the least written. No implement, no count, no mark. Just the door, and her on the wrong side of it.

It takes the one thing the dynamic is made of, his attention, and withholds it. Write that and you do not need the paddle. #kinkwriting

Praise is harder to write than cruelty. Cruelty sounds confident by default. Praise requires him to have been paying enough attention to be specific, and the writer has to have done that work too.

Disagree?

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Name the thing kink fiction gets wrong so consistently that you have stopped complaining about it.

Not the worst thing. The one you have given up on.

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The safeword is the most wasted device in the genre. It appears once, in the negotiation, and is never heard from again.

Has anyone written one being used mid scene and kept the scene alive?

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Negotiation on the page is either the best scene in the book or a form somebody fills in.

What is the difference, in a book you have actually read?

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Somewhere there is a scene you have reread more than the book deserved, and you would not admit it was the reason you kept the book.

You do not have to name the book. Name the scene.

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Aftercare written as a wind-down reads like an apology. Written as part of the scene it becomes the thing the scene was for.

Where have you seen it done as part of the scene?

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