WE WERE ALL DEFECTS - YA Dystopian Thriller
The opening-
The road to happiness was paved with bubblegum pink plastic tiles.

WE WERE ALL DEFECTS - YA Dystopian Thriller
The opening-
The road to happiness was paved with bubblegum pink plastic tiles.
#dvparty opening line (er paragraph) day!
"Hunkered alone at his corner table, Taerin tapped a disjointed rhythm on his thigh. He pulled the letter from his pocket for the dozenth time to check the details within: Kissing Donkey Inn. Blackwood. Sifsday evening. Check, check, and check."
#DVParty Time! It's Day 3!
Tease the projects you plan to pitch during #DVpit!
Day 3 (9/27/2026): Post your opening line!
As always have fun and be respectful!
Go to dvpit.carrd.co for more info
the first line of UNTIL THE SUN FADES…
“They say that when you die, you see flashes of your memories, as the seconds tick down and your life drains away.”
Here’s the opening line to 💎 THE FALL OF RESURRECTION MANOR 🥀, my adult fantasy about a manor where the wealthy go for a week of consequence-free death, and the two people dead set on escaping its shadow:
Hale dreaded the coming week, the one he’d been working towards for a decade.
#DVParty Day 3. Opening Line:
It happened on a clear bright day in early March. The sort of day where you feel the potential of spring just around the corner after a long winter, but there is still a chill in the air, still a need to wrap up against the wind. A bird was pecking rhythmically in the
#DVParty Day 3.
Yup, just the opening line.
No big fantasy or horror/ghost stuff until later in the chapter. So for extra I'll just tease that the first chapter is called "The Last Time I’ll Ever Be a Good Samaritan".
#DVParty Day Three: Opening lines of my YA contemporary, FINE MEANS STOP ASKING.
Well that's the pitches for Wednesday DVPit ready. #DVParty
Now I just need to remember to actually post them...
#DVparty
The opening line of SKIN AS WHITE AS SNOW;
Funny, how dying was like running through a dark, dark wood.
A feminist retelling of Snow White as dark academia mystery.