#5amWritersClub I had the perfect dialogue version of some narration.
The subtlety of the original narration was better for the book, but the dialogue version would be better for visual media.

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#5amWritersClub I had the perfect dialogue version of some narration.
The subtlety of the original narration was better for the book, but the dialogue version would be better for visual media.
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