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@scripthive.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 2:39 PM

“I Was Left Unsupervised. I found Resident Evil. Then things got weird.” Over 500 new scripts were added last month on the Script Hive- some of the highlights: #scriptsky #scriptsky+ #readthemovies
scripthive.substack.com/p/i-was-left...

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@shaunaomeara.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 2:10 PM

All recommendations gratefully received on what to watch in this vein. I very much want to track down Double Indemnity (1944) next as I love Billy Wilder stuff (just haven't gotten hold of it).

But yes, The Third Man was good!

#filmsky #scriptsky

@shaunaomeara.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 1:53 PM

Finally watched The Third Man (1949). Great performances all around in this little noir set in the aftermath of WWII.

There is a chase scene that takes place in this labyrinthine sewer system that looks absolutely splendid in black-and-white. Worth the price of admission alone.

#filmsky #scriptsky

@jazzcomposer.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 1:48 PM

Series Pilot Spec Script Available Two former US Army special forces soldiers are hired by a large bank to covertly eliminate hackers worldwide in order to protect the world banking system. DM for copy. #screenwriting #tvwriting #scriptsky #scriptsky+ #filmsky #moviesky #authorsky #writingprompt

Script available in PDF or Final Draft format
@theartofcharts.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 12:09 PM

Well, I'm at sixes and sevens with the Blacklist for FAR AS THE CROW FLIES. Overall sixes.

Sounds like I need to play more with information flow (which has been a bugbear in this - there's a tradeoff between tension and surprise), and perhaps untwirl Joe's moustache somewhat.
#scriptsky

Overall
6

Premise
6

Plot
6

Character
7

Dialogue
7

Setting
7

Genre Horror,Action Thriller,Action & Adventure
Logline Desperate for visas and a change in their lives, four young Americans take jobs on
a remote farm in the Australian Outback, unaware that they are placing themselves
in the hands of a sadistic killer and his spiteful assistant.

Pages 99The eerie atmosphere and indelible imagery of films like MIDSOMMAR and PICNIC AT HANGING ROCK are electrified, in this script, with the tension of GET OUT and SCREAM. The visual style is slick, polished, and unforgettable, from the blisteringly hot scrubland where farmer Joe leaves his victims to their deaths, and the painfully-bright caravan where Crow and Tori find themselves trapped, to the visceral claustrophobia that they struggle to escape inside it, choking on acetone fumes, and the significance of a small black dot on the orange-tinted horizon of a velvet sky. As each of them is reduced to fighting for their lives, the script ratchets up the pressure-cooker intensity to a fever pitch, forcing androgynous goth Crow to expose their both metaphoric and literal scars, and Tori to confront the anxiety-inducing PTSD of a school shooting that has left her saddled with survivor’s guilt. From the moment Joe quietly chastises surrogate son Kyle for the type of people he has chosen to bring to the farm this time, the script plants an ominous seed of foreboding that boils
over into something far more harrowing, galloping toward a climactic showdown that brings both violence and cathartic release.The gripping experience that plays out in this script is undeniably engaging, and the craftsmanship on the page is equally impressive. It might be interesting to consider whether there could be opportunities to delve just a little deeper into more of Joe's motivation, back story, and inner purpose, as a vehicle to bring just that much more insight and context into his treatment of his victims. Any opportunities to potentially preserve a little more of a sense of mystery for longer, in the first half of the story, might also create that much more intrigue and even more gut-punch twist moments as
characters like Crow and Tori begin to piece together what is going on at the same time as the audience. Beyond becoming waylaid in their caravan in the middle of the desert, one or two more evolutions, escalations, or layers to what is happening to the victims might also yield all the more color and variety as a means of shaking up the energy over the course of the middle segments of the
second act. Even if they have traditionally targeted loners, potentially expanding a little further on how Joe and Kyle have been getting away with their deadly behavior for as long as they have might also even further fortify the impact of their journey.Prospects

This script deserves credit for crafting a visceral, immersive experience in a way that is riveting, leveraging palpable atmosphere and visuals to bring its story to life persuasively with a similar sense
of immediacy and texture. The bleak Australian outback becomes in many ways a character in and of itself, defining the tone and flavor of the film in a distinctive way with a recognizable look and feel.
Crow, in particular, offers an opportunity for a standout leading performance, in terms of talent, while Tori, Madison, Emma, Kyle, and Joe round out an ensemble of diverse and appealing voices to
attract cast. While potentially considering opportunities to lean even further into some of the intricacies, complexities, and elements of mystery and variety in the story might only broaden its appeal, it feels as though there is certainly an audience for a film like this one in the genre space, either in theaters or streaming on platforms like Netflix.
@mikewrites33.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 11:19 AM

Who’s writing on this first day of #HalloweenSeason #SpookySeason #5AmWritersClub #WritingCommunity #ScriptSky #AmWriting

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@minorfracas.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 10:32 AM

So, I've co-written a rom-com (not my usual genre) and I'd love to get notes on it. Would anyone be interested in a script swap?

I would be open to reading any genre, but I'd love for my reader to be a fan, if not a writer, of rom-coms.

#scriptsky

@minorfracas.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 9:00 AM

There's one character in all your work, who is the most important character in the story, yet who must never make an actual appearance in the story.

This character is the God of the story. All is beholden to this character's whims and choices.

It's you.

#5AMWritersClub #scriptsky

@jazzcomposer.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 7:33 AM

Series Pilot Spec Script Available Two former US Army special forces soldiers are hired by a large bank to covertly eliminate hackers worldwide in order to protect the world banking system. DM for copy. #screenwriting #tvwriting #scriptsky #scriptsky+ #filmsky #moviesky #authorsky #writingprompt

Script available in PDF or Final Draft format
@jonfour.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 1:23 AM

I've never been to AFM and (for various reasons) I had no plans to break that cycle this year. But someone went and planted a seed in my head that it might be good for me. Who's been? How have you liked it? What stage should your project(s) be at?
#scriptsky #filmsky

@jazzcomposer.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 1:18 AM

Series Pilot Spec Script Available Two former US Army special forces soldiers are hired by a large bank to covertly eliminate hackers worldwide in order to protect the world banking system. DM for copy. #screenwriting #tvwriting #scriptsky #scriptsky+ #filmsky #moviesky #authorsky #writingprompt

Script available in PDF or Final Draft format
@leahfromsd.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 12:58 AM

My horror brand as a writer

#Scriptsky

Blonde woman in pink bathing suit next to giant monster from the Critters movies
@themoviescribe.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 12:35 AM

I tried to come up with a name for the band in my screenplay but couldn't do it. Then while I was relaxing in the tub 🛀I was writing a scene between two of the characters & out of the exchange the name came. Sometimes you just have to sit back & let the characters tell you their story #scriptsky+

@kablackquois.bsky.socialOct 1, 2026, 12:20 AM

I am *sure* some writer in my feed can use this knowledge somewhere #scriptsky

youtu.be/UpMlUQI9KsY?...

@onewingedsparrow.bsky.socialSep 30, 2026, 10:58 PM

Hey, qsq for #ScriptSky (particularly working TV writers):

Say you wanted to write a long term Freaky Friday body swap between two main characters. Think as if Picard/Riker had swapped bodies in episode 2 and that just STUCK for 2+ seasons.

How would YOU address it in dialogue slugs and business?

@pezscreenwriting.bsky.socialSep 30, 2026, 10:56 PM

Comment in recently-received notes for my fantasy-comedy

"Ask of every sequence: what becomes impossible to return from after this?"

Love it

#screenwriting #goodwritingday #notgivingup #ScriptSky

@leahelizabethevans.bsky.socialSep 30, 2026, 10:54 PM

Just here to say I made myself watch Happy Death Day, Megan, & Knock at the Cabin and I had a great(?) time.

I only looked away a couple of times but played it off (to myself) that it was because I needed something in the other room. Which I totally did at those moments btw! #moviesky #scriptsky

@timwestland.bsky.socialSep 30, 2026, 10:39 PM

Hey #scriptsky folk

If you're not following @theplotdoc.bsky.social, then you're missing out