the memory suddenly moving to the hospital is a bit jarring as i was not expecting this section #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

the additional sound effects like when saying boom makes you more immersed #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

her voice is very calm and relaxing #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

#hwa3 #storyaboutastory The memory shifted to a positive experience when she got the chance to walk away, but with a brace. At the end, it got dark again when she went back to the hospital. She mentioned how every time she tells the story, she always forgets some of the detail

#hwa3 #storyaboutastory Her voice is so gentle, with this pace to allow the audience to process slowly. The gentle background music slowly grows louder but stays quieter than her voice, creating a feeling of calm and focus. The story got dark so fast after she fell; does not suit the calming feeling

Memory comes first with the remembrance of sound, smell and images instead of what happened. Those tiny pieces made up the memory as a whole, they might all be real, but when you put them all together. They can’t represent the whole picture. #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

The end using a very creepy and scary background sound that matches what she said, what she think is the actually scary part. It’s helpful to understand the whole situation that story could be misleading and losing information. It’s impressive to the audience #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

The mood shift here is very smooth when she starts talking about what is missing from the memory. She successfully recovered so the tone before was relaxing and not that serious, talked about a story she heard and how she toughg the doctor was joking. Then everything shifts. #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

I love how she’s telling the story, it’s not plain but with rhythm. Especially when she talked about living with kids that are burnt, the emotion she had when she had to live with other injured kid. The voice is flowing up and down with real emotions in it. #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

The background music in the start creates a serious sense, and the sound of bomb of failing to jump comes just right on time. It brought the audience into the scene, it drags us closer like using sound to make us feel we are there. #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

"It was the sounds that children make...when they're dying"

That got dark really fast... #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

Actually the more I listen, the more those bird chirps sound more and more like a car alarm going off. #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

I wonder if those like bird chirping noises in the background is meant to represent what a lot of people say, that the machines beeping continuously sound like bird chirps. #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

I don't know why, and I literally heard the word "excerpt," but I was fully expecting to hear someone start singing for the next 5 minutes. #hwa3 #storyaboutastory

wow the imagery she creates of a hospital at night is a very eerie and accurate retelling. #storyaboutastory #hwa3

the childlike perspective is so unique and important, I love the idea of a child discrediting the doctor, even more obsessed with her being right. #storyaboutastory #hwa3

the background sounds of the kids turning into this sort of mysterious backing music is a very interesting choice. i love it. #storyaboutastory #hwa3

#hwa3 #storyaboutastory Lots of empowerment about movement again