@cmhind-author.bsky.socialMy dev editor provided this feedback: "...it might have been helpful to include a scene earlier in the book where..."? I cut that very scene from my first draft to reduce work count.
Thankfully, I archive.
Time to restore and polish.
@cmhind-author.bsky.social383 Words After Midnight
After midnight, words spooled
I caught two scenes before finding sleep
Writers' musings. Oops, Haiku?
@cmhind-author.bsky.social@cmhind-author.bsky.socialSample notes from my editor:
🛠 Dev Edit (26): “I kind of wonder if it might have been helpful to include a scene earlier in the book where [REDACTED].”
😱 Shocked (15): “Oooh no, this had not occurred to me at all! This is a great twist.”